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Kids
Voting
2008
Essay Winners |
Dayton
Development Coalition
/DP&L Essay Contest
Kids
Voting invited high school students to participate in
the
Kids Voting 2008 Essay Contest...
Kids
Voting invited high school students to participate in
the Kids Voting 2008 Essay Contest. The two student
winners were invited to participate in the 2008 Dayton
Development Coalition’s annual fly in joining
approximately 100 local government, business and
non-profit leaders to fly into Washington D.C. to show
regional support for various issues. In addition, the
two winners were invited to join the Dayton Area
Chamber of Commerce’s Legislative Day in
Columbus.
All travel expenses were generously sponsored by
DP&L!
Guidelines:
• Student must be in high school. (9-12)
• Submit 1-page essay with a completed entry form.
• Use a blank 8 1/2” x 11” sheet of white paper.
• Be original: your work must be your own idea and
written by you – not wikipedia!
• Students must be able to travel in May 2008
Essay
Question:
Americans Ages 18-24 consistently demonstrate some of
the lowest turn out rates according to the National
Association of Secretaries of State. How would you
propose to increase voter participation from young
Americans? You may want to include any information
about your participation in "get out the
vote" activities.
Entry Deadline:
The deadline for entries is Friday, February 15, 2008,
5:00PM. All entries must be received at the Kids
Voting office by that date. Contest winners will be
notified by Monday, March 31. The winning essayists
will be expected to participate in both events in May
2008.
Judging:
The 2007 essay judges included the following: Paul
Barbas (President & CEO, DP&L), Lisa Barhorst
(General Manager, WDTN), Mayor Mike Beamish (Troy),
Dr. Steven Johnson (President, Sinclair Community
College), and J.P. Nauseef (President and CEO, Dayton
Development Coalition).
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Dayton
Area Essay Winners
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Marie
Rehg
(grandaughter of League members Virgil and
Eileen Rehg) |
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As
the 2008 election approaches, the major
candidates seem to be focusing on the War
in
Iraq
. This is a very important present issue.
But what about the future? Out of the
issues
America
will soon be facing, two very prominent
problems are the energy crisis and quality
of education.
The
Earth’s oil supply is drying up. The
ozone holes are growing. In a few decades
we will be forced to find other energy
sources, and the environmental effects
will become more apparent. Science has
dire predictions for the future; however,
oil proves to be too lucrative to worry
world powers.
In
the meantime with less ozone to block
sunlight, issues linked to sun exposure
will likely increase. This could add yet
another problem to the already crumbling
healthcare system. And with our dependency
on oil, it will be hard to adjust so
quickly to a major oil shortage. Other
fuel sources exist, and we need to
increase the cultivation of those sources
now in order to be ready for later.
Education
shapes the future. With our current
education system, what will our future be
like? When third-world countries are
developing, if they are to be successful,
one of their biggest priorities is to
educate the people. History has shown us
that education can help change third-world
countries into major world players. The
main focus in American education seems to
be math and science.
America
is far from the top in math and science
scores, but maybe that isn’t the issue.
Do
not forget that
America
still dominates the world economy. Math
and science scores alone do not make a
country great. New legislation is going to
require more math and science credits in
high school. But legislation cannot make
people excel in these areas. Those who are
naturally inclined in those areas will
take the extra credits on their own. Those
who are not naturally inclined will take
the credits and perhaps not do very well.
That is not to say that people shouldn’t
try to strengthen the areas they are weak
in. But students can only take so many
classes. These types of requirements may
take away the classes where some of these
students are the strongest. Not everyone
is going to be a scientist or
mathematician.
But
math and science are important to teach
people how to think. Critical thinking is
one of the problems with the American
school system. Instead of challenging
students to rise to higher standards,
education is lowering the standards for
them. This does not make students think.
Literature is revised and put into a low
comprehension level. Students are not
learning more accelerated vocabulary and
at the same time are not able to
appreciate the beauty and meaning of the
author’s work. Education is meant to
challenge and help people grow in
knowledge.
Despite
all the other issues in American politics,
these stand out as two that will greatly
affect not only the future of the
United States
but also the future of the world. In this
global economy we must all work together
to solve the energy crisis, and
America
must keep progressing in education. The
world is moving forward. But are we
standing still? As James Harold Wilson
said, “He who rejects change is the
architect of decay.” |
| Baxter
Stapleton |
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Ordinary
people are capable of doing extraordinary
things.
Citizens of the
United States
voted in 535 ordinary men and women who
make decisions in the
U.S.
capital that affect the lives of over
301,325,000 people.
The men and women voting in the
U.S. capital make decisions that affect
our daily life like the amount of money
taken out of our paychecks, the highway
system we use to travel, the fuel
efficiency of our modes of transit, and
the quality of the air in which we breathe
in each day.
Even though the 535 men and women
who vote in the
U.S.
capital have the official say on what
becomes a law, the citizens are the ones
who are ultimately responsible for keeping
the elected officials accountable for
acting on issues that the people of this
country believe are important.
Citizens are coming together to
vocalize issues that are affecting
millions of Americans.
If I could address Congressional
candidates in
Washington
, I would identify health care and
environmental policy as the top two issues
today.
The
535 men and women who vote in the
U.S.
capital have enormous control over our
health and well-being.
The government controls the fate of
medical research, the future of health
insurance, and the future of medicine.
Health care is one of the most
important domestic issues today.
Congress allocated $29 billion to
the National Institutes of Health;
however, spending cuts last year reduced
funding to the National Cancer Institute,
so now cancer researches have a much
harder chance of getting funding.
The country may see a shortage of
researches because of the cuts.
With about 46.6 million people in
the
U.S.
living without healthcare insurance,
people are concerned and want a change in
health care policy.
The cost of health insurance and
medical bills continue to rise, and middle
and lower class families want to afford
healthcare without going bankrupt.
As the politicians in
Washington
discuss the future of health insurance, we
need to remind our elected leaders about
the millions of uninsured Americans and
support a solution that helps everyone.
The
U.S.
spends less than six cents of every health
care dollar on research to prevent or
treat illness; therefore, we need to
persuade our leaders to increase spending
on health care in order to preserve and
save lives.
Every American works hard and
deserves the opportunity to receive
quality health care.
Many
Americans also are noticing the effects of
another very important issue, the
environment.
Americans are addicted to foreign
oil. Not
only is the addiction hurting our pockets
but also the air we breathe.
The fuel economy of
U.S.
automobiles is one of the worst in the
world behind countries in Europe and
Asia
. With
a greater fuel economy, we will burn less
fossil fuels such as gasoline or diesel
that contribute to a number of
environmental problems such as air
pollution (smog) and global climate
change.
In addition, spills from
transporting oil and petroleum products
damage ecosystems and pollute groundwater
and streams.
Besides
Australia
, the
United States
is the only country that signed the Kyoto
Protocol but refused to ratify the
protocol that calls for the reduction of
greenhouse gas emissions.
Preserved areas like Grand Canyon
and
Yellowstone
National Parks
are hurting because of new roads and poor
air quality.
The industrial tourism is hurting
the beautiful National Parks.
Americans are concerned about the
environment, so we need to look to other
forms of energy like electricity that are
already highly efficient and available in
order to break our addiction to foreign
oil. Americans
realize the importance of keeping the air
clean and preserving green space, but we
need the help of our elected officials in
Washington
to make these important issues into laws.
The
535 men and women voting in the
U.S.
capital have the power to make laws, but
the other 300,000,000 of us have the
ability and power to influence the
decision making of our elected officials.
We all are ordinary people. If we
work together, we can work to solve two of
the biggest issues today, health care and
the environment.
Without citizens engaging in the
conversation, candidates table issues and
many times nothing gets accomplished. If I
had the opportunity to address
Congressional candidates in
Washington
, I would vocalize the importance of
solving the health care crisis and
problems concerning the environment.
All Americans want to be healthy
and breathe in clean air, and we can solve
these two overwhelming issues by working
together.
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